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Sorrow by ~freakledlioness:iconfreakledlioness:

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Sorrow
My hands bleed with disbelief,
As I cry out trying to be discrete,
I pounded my emotions out onto the walls,
Trying to comprehend my downfall,
No one was here to rescue me from myself,
When anger came and consumed me yet again,
So I'm her lying on the floor,
Crying in a fetal position like a child,
Please save me from my grief,
Please save me I too am sometimes weak,
Save me before this cycle of sorrow repeats
©2004-2009 ~freakledlioness
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Submitted: August 5, 2004
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I was feeling sad earlier but an awesome old karate movie cheered me up.

I wrote this in like two minutes.... It's not that good but *shrugs* ohhhh well

And yes I took the pic and it is off myself.
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~endofeternity:iconendofeternity: Aug 5, 2004, 6:57:54 PM
It's been months since I've favorited something, congratulations. As for constructive criticism, it's discrete. I love this.

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"And then I stabbed him in the eye with a pencil!"
~freakledlioness:iconfreakledlioness: Aug 5, 2004, 7:02:38 PM
Thanks, I feel special :heart:

And another thanks I have now fixed all my spelling errors.

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~d-tamer-x:icond-tamer-x: Aug 5, 2004, 7:09:54 PM
*glompiees* sooooo awesomeful~ *wishes had writing talent* alas, i have none x__x;;

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~tickingclock:icontickingclock: Aug 5, 2004, 8:00:54 PM
Oh my.. that is gorgeous. ; ; So beautiful and emotional.. :heart: +fav

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now I just stare into the sun
~Oddette:iconOddette: Aug 5, 2004, 9:29:33 PM
Yes. There is something about seing someone phsically beating-up on someone else that just makes you feel all giddy and warm inside.

Glad you're not sad anymore :D or ARE you o________O

ANYWAY nice poetry skills :]

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~freakledlioness:iconfreakledlioness: Aug 5, 2004, 10:04:27 PM
omg yes you do! I FAVED YOUR POEM AND IT WAS SOOOO FUCKING SWEET!!!

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~freakledlioness:iconfreakledlioness: Aug 5, 2004, 10:05:29 PM
;_; :heart: :heart: thankeys for the fav *hugs*

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~freakledlioness:iconfreakledlioness: Aug 5, 2004, 10:07:45 PM
lol, you make me laugh therefore if i had any I would give you a cold star sticker, but since i don't.... um I'll give you an imaginary one cuzz it's the thought that counts.

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~d-tamer-x:icond-tamer-x: Aug 6, 2004, 9:20:27 AM
lmao X3 well, anything joukai/kaijou related tends to help me think better... XD *doesn't know if that should be good or bad* lmao seems like i'm going to need this pairing forever lol

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